Rhyming Response from Kentucky

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mild_mannered_super_hero
Dec 13, 2012 1:05 am

Another man, from Kin-tuck-ee

also had an ostomy

He read your poem, which made him smile

He thought, I'll rhyme you back awhile

He sat and set his brain to work

His duty to the forum, not to shirk

After a while, he began to fret

He couldn't get a rhyme just yet

His poor brain, he racked and racked

He just couldn't quite get the knack

Perhaps he'd have himself a smoke

That might give his brain a poke

Come on now brain, give me a rhyme

You've had long enough, it's high time

At last he thought, I've had enough

I just can't do this rhyming stuff

MMSH

christiesdad
Dec 13, 2012 3:05 am

MMSH,
If that is original and your own stuff---I take my hat off to you. Very good.

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mild_mannered_super_hero
Dec 13, 2012 4:27 am


yep
Bill
Dec 13, 2012 11:21 am
Hello MMSH,   I suppose it  does look better done in separated lines and it's easier to read. Nonetheless, I also liked it as it was the first time I read it as it has a sort of appeal that comes with my own struggles to find line-breaks rhymes and punctuations.  Perhaps we can have some more when you get the 'urge'.

Best wishes  Bill
Help_Me_Rhonda
Dec 13, 2012 1:13 pm


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Too cute!
 

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