Poetry needs form.

Poetry needs rhythm, rhyme and form.
Its always been, this the norm.
Without the lines in synchromesh.
The whole thing seems like one big mess.



MY LOVE AND MY BAG.



I love the concept that my bag.
Could bring you close to me.
Now this has happened I can brag.
That this was meant to be.

All my waiting for someone.
To come into my life.
I hope that this will run and run.
And you’ll end up as my wife.


In answer to the question what!
“What is there and what is not?”.

The words are in the blog above.
That's the one on bags and love.
The thing that leads me to despair.
Is that the LAYOUT's never there.

When I come on to this site
Inever seem toget it right.
Whether it be rhyme or song.
The space between the lines is wrong.

B. Withers 2011

Try 'shift - enter' at the end of each sentence. See what happens.

Thanks dawneagle, I do believe you have given me the answer to this vexing problem. I will revisit some of my blogs and get them re-formed.Best wishesBill